Vimeo will not work with Firefox for some dumb reason. Had to use Chrome.
The title editing was nice.
The color needs to be corrected, and there at least 2-3 segment with different color values. See 2-3 corrections.
Needs chroma NR. Camcorder denoise filter in
VirtualDub.
Needs chroma shifts to correct color bleed. There's a filter for this in Avisynth.
We're working on an Avisynth primer now, but it'll be another month or two before that done. It's not easy to put together that many clips!
It's soft/blurry somewhat, but I think that was caused by Vimeo converting it.
You done a better than average job that I can see.