No, we cannot.
That's not how this site works. You don't post a clip and then expect others to work for you for free. Either pay for work, or learn to do it yourself. The forum is to assist you when you do it yourself -- NOT do it for you.
You didn't even give us any hints as to what you think needs to be fixed.
Furthermore...
You don't PM me 24 hours after you make a post, on weekend of all things, telling me that I need to answer your post.
And I'm really pissed that you posted a clip with audio so loud that I knocked over a drink trying to turn off the speakers. When you post VIDEO clips asking for VIDEO advice, you'd better then hell remove or mute to audio. Or at least give warning that the clip contains LOUD audio. If I could reach through the computer right now, I'd probably strangle you ala Homer strangling Bart.
I don't get angry often, but congrats, you've done it.