I'm a little surprised the professional transfer is so bad.
Can you physically see the "crease" on the tape itself?
Usually I'll see stuff similar to that with umatic, but it is much lower in the frame and I assume it was the recording device that had the head switching point in the wrong place, but even then, I wouldn't expect the playback to vary from machine as far as where it shows up in the image. A crease should always have the defect in the same place on all playback devices is my understanding.
Anyhow, I've refurbished several Umatic machines in the 9xx0 series as well as a few BVU-9x0's, some with the internal TBC/NR card. Downside to the BVUs with internal TBC is that they process in composite, so the DUB outputs/S-Video mod won't benefit from the TBC card being there. I also have (and recapped) just about every type of DUB-input TBC ever made and I've also modded a few to S-Video output so they can work with more modern TBCs also. Kind of in the process of figuring out what the ideal TBC setup really is for these, but they all tend to perform a little differently.
Here's a sample of one of my transfers, all I did was do a slight crop, deinterlace, and upscale to HD for YouTube bitrate purposes. No color adjustment or filters were applied in post. It was a VO-9800 modified to S-Video output and then passed through a modern TBC that has both line and frame characteristics.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51F4...&start_radio=1
Eventually I plan to put out my own Umatic transfer service, but I need more real world examples of difficult tapes as all of the random ones I've gotten on eBay have transferred quite nicely. I'd love to take a crack at a tape at something Specbros have transferred and see if I can do better.
I'll transfer that tape for you for free if you mail it to me (I'm in Michigan) and pay the return shipping since I'm curious what my hardware can do. I wouldn't suggest doing it if you're outside of the USA though. That, and I don't have any PAL Umatic machines, they're all NTSC. PM me if interested.